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Teen Poetry #9

Tunnel

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-01-31 06:39 PM

How could I let myself fall?
Kneeling on scraped up knees
Begging to find my light again
Hear my lonely plead.

I use to fly high
But now I feel so low
How could I've let this happen?
Why did you have to use me so

My heart was your toy
Nothing more then a game
Someone for your amusement
It still hurts all the same

I walk by the people
Smiles spread across their face
I alone in the shadows
Feeling nothing but disgrace

I walk down this tunnel
Filled with sorrow and despair
At the end I see the light
Golden and fresh like the air

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2009-02-02 06:40 PM

wow. i don't get why no ones commented on this one zach. its amazing...and i love it.
it's got to be one of your best, and i'm not just saying that

library!

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-02-04 09:27 PM

Well, I was going to pick out my favorite part, but I couldn't decide! HaHa... Great poem. Really depressing though.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2009-02-04 11:11 PM

Haha. Ironic thing is that the "tunnel" represents depression and finding my way out of the tunnel is sorta a good thing, i think. lol Thanks for reading and your amazing compliments!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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