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Push Me Higher - Love Me Louder
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Push Me Higher - Love Me Louder |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada 
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I haven't posted in quite a while, and this is actually one of my worst poems, but for some odd reason I still like it. I wrote it at the beach on a cloudy day when no one was there, it was quite perfect. There is a stillness here that forgives all wrongs. I hear every movement and long for simple love. The air is clean and pure, it sends chills down my spine... and I want you to hold me. I want you to embrace me. I want you to consume me like the waves do the shore. Nothing sounds more beautiful than the gental rise & fall of the tide. We are the stillness... my dear. So push me higher - love me louder. julianna "Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Definitely not your best, but I think this poem is still really good. I like it!!!! "When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car" |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Thank you  julianna |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This kind of gets you in the heart. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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