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KISS ME
| Teen Poetry #9 |
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KISS ME |
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creepyhermitpoet New Member
since 2010-07-27
Posts 2 |
This one is dedicated to all of the beautiful ladies out there Let me know what you think! KISS ME::::: ~Kiss me under the stars ~On the planet mars ~With our space helmets on ~As we glow of Neon ~Kiss me on a mountain ~Near the water fountain ~Kiss me on a rainbow ~In front of creepy old Joe ~Kiss me on a rocketship ~In a field of parsnip ~Over an open fire ~Filled with marshmallow desire ~At my school ~Cuz that’s so cool ~On a table ~In the stable ~On a roof ~We'll fall off and go "POOF" ~In the bushes ~Where the cactus pushes ~In a stream ~If u care to dream ~On the moon ~Hearing the wolves goodnight tune ~In the nests ~Filled with pests ~Damn birds ~If I knew the words ~I'd tell them to get lost ~Outta their nest, we'd get tossed ~In the trees ~Filled with bees ~In a hive ~We'd be eaten alive ~In the shower ~High pressure, water power ~On a couch ~Then we can slouch ~Though your father's ~Oscar the grouch ~How about this slimy plan ~Lets head for his garbage can ~Or a cardboard box ~Where lives, a wild fox ~On a deck ~Where no one would suspect ~In the wild, tall, tall grass ~Where the path of a hobo, we cross ~In the park ~Where it's dark ~I don't care ~How about anywhere ~As long as you're there ~It's time to let down your hair ~Who cares if those pesky storks stare ~My heart's beating so fast, it's gonna tear ~I'll lead by example ~Don't be afraid ~It doesn't hurt ~Though my body is frayed ~The pain feels so good ~Follow me, you should ~My will is strong ~I shall be gone ~Do, what you may ~But I won't stay ~Don't follow unless you mean such words ~Don't just run your mouth like the nerds ~Be the creature who speaks with such sweet action ~In which, you'll find the greatest satisfaction --------------------------------------------------- ~I never chose poetry poetry chose me~ Check out my youtube channel for my live readings of my poems and suscribe! http://www.youtube.com/user/CreepyHermitPoet |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  This is pretty decent... Now, repost it without the rhymes... expand your thoughts without having to resort to the time hinored tradition of rhyming... I think you'll surprise yourself. font> Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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creepyhermitpoet New Member
since 2010-07-27
Posts 2 |
~Thanks for welcoming me to the site. Yes you re right I shouldn t rhyme...WHAT WAS I THINKING!!! so I got a better idea. How about I come to you next time before I go to my publisher to make sure I have your approval before my NEXT book gets published? |
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