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Love Crime |
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mozart4321 Junior Member
since 2010-06-29
Posts 29 |
I wish I could take Away the mistakes I make I wish I could go back in time. When I still had you When you loved me too... But I commited a love crime. Everyday I sit and think And everyday you seem to shrink Oh... what was going through my head? I had it all We had a ball But I slept in someone else's bed. I wish I could right This monstrous blight But its not up to me to choose. I broke your heart I tore it apart Its my fault we had to lose. I know its no use To say "sorry", thats an excuse Because too many times you've heard that lie. But I pray and hope That time will help us cope And end the silent tears I cry. If one wish I was granted I would wish for your branded Heart to heal and trust. Because nothing can undo What I did to you Selfish, greedy, and with lust. I think you would have been Better in life, of what I've seen If I was never there. I wouldn't have ruined your life Caused you such strife Put you through such dispair. I cannot change the past but pray That maybe you and me someday Can finally come to terms. Its what we deserve To heal the raw nerve Forgiveness is what my heart yearns. Because I really do miss you The feelings I had were true I miss everything we once were. I could never hate Or forget loving you, I'll wait For you to forgive me last, once more. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Some of the rhymes seemed forced, but I liked it! "When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car" |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yes. This is the start of something good.  ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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mozart4321 Junior Member
since 2010-06-29
Posts 29 |
thank you. |
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