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Goldfish in a Box
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Goldfish in a Box |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Your jacket hangs in my room, Like your face hangs in my mind Sometimes I can't believe that You, of all, are mine The night goes on, I find a reason To stay up, to be awake In the early morning I see the dawn as it breaks I begin to understand you But the pieces don't connect You are a puzzle to my being My very state of mind How should I react to your inconsistencies? Am I more or less remembered? Your silly simple ways keep me stilled But I don't know what to do Swimming in the dark Like a goldfish in a box That never knows there's light or day I go on in never ending blindness Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :) |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Good poem! Loved the last stanza the most! "When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car" |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Wow. I'm sorry if I appear harsh or brutal but this totally ROCKS! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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