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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland

0 posted 2010-07-11 01:01 AM



So this is what it feels like,
to be standing next to you.
Waiting for the world to stop,
awed by the view.

I never will forget it,
the way we'd always laugh.
Spending time in the sun,
talking of the past.

The sun with all it's laughter,
the moon with all it's tears,
I promise to always listen,
I promise I'll be here.

Forever and a day,
that's how long it'll be.
That's the amount of time
you'll mean the world to me.


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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1 posted 2010-07-11 02:15 PM


Lovely!  I hope you gave this to someone to cherish.

Words are weapons, toss them with care.
~ Mysteria ~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
2 posted 2010-07-11 05:40 PM


yes, I have.
Thanks for reading.


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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Highlands, Scotland.
3 posted 2010-07-11 06:48 PM


Very sweet. (:
totalspiffingness
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 8

4 posted 2010-07-14 11:10 PM


Aww this is very cute. You totally took a cliche line and made it seem very original. Great job!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
5 posted 2010-07-14 11:42 PM


Thank You.  

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

*tori_rose*
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since 2010-10-12
Posts 44
Weber City, VA
6 posted 2010-10-13 01:31 PM


this is a very sweet poem u must of had a very specail person in mind

~*tori*~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
7 posted 2010-10-13 04:39 PM


Lovely. I can see this being a hallmark card.

-Trina.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

Prats
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since 2010-12-16
Posts 74

8 posted 2010-12-17 07:26 AM


Wow!!! u r a great poet... d poem is really touching...

Prats!!! :D
Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Bob K
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9 posted 2010-12-17 10:18 PM




All my best, and give my regards to Flavius Belby, if you please.  Seems like the two of you are doing very well out there these days, and that makes me very happy.

Affectionately yours, Bob kaven

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
10 posted 2010-12-22 03:16 PM


Thank you, very much. We are doing much better than we have been for a long while. =) I'll be sure to send ur regard to Flavius. =P

Merry Christmas!

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
11 posted 2011-01-01 09:16 AM


I do not like gum balls either. Must be a unicorn thing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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