Teen Poetry #9 |
Forever and a Day |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
So this is what it feels like, to be standing next to you. Waiting for the world to stop, awed by the view. I never will forget it, the way we'd always laugh. Spending time in the sun, talking of the past. The sun with all it's laughter, the moon with all it's tears, I promise to always listen, I promise I'll be here. Forever and a day, that's how long it'll be. That's the amount of time you'll mean the world to me. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely! I hope you gave this to someone to cherish. Words are weapons, toss them with care. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
yes, I have. Thanks for reading. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Very sweet. (: |
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totalspiffingness New Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 8 |
Aww this is very cute. You totally took a cliche line and made it seem very original. Great job! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank You. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
this is a very sweet poem u must of had a very specail person in mind ~*tori*~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Lovely. I can see this being a hallmark card. -Trina. |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
Wow!!! u r a great poet... d poem is really touching... Prats!!! :D |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
All my best, and give my regards to Flavius Belby, if you please. Seems like the two of you are doing very well out there these days, and that makes me very happy. Affectionately yours, Bob kaven |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you, very much. We are doing much better than we have been for a long while. =) I'll be sure to send ur regard to Flavius. =P Merry Christmas! {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I do not like gum balls either. Must be a unicorn thing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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