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NicoleRocker12367
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since 2009-01-07
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0 posted 2009-01-28 05:21 PM


Can't you see
my tears
they're so plain
can't hide em

Baby why can't you
quit hurtin me
I wish that we
could be together

you can't see
the tears
that run down
my cheeks

I wish we could
kiss and make it better
but nothin will
bring the love back
and erase the tears


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1 posted 2009-01-28 06:06 PM


I like it. Keep up the writing.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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2 posted 2009-01-28 07:15 PM


Enjoyed this piece. Can't wait to see more from you.
daddysgurlxx5xx
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since 2009-03-08
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3 posted 2009-03-08 11:34 AM


i very well enjoyed this poem... keep up the work
pandabear
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since 2009-03-08
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4 posted 2009-03-08 11:00 PM


keep writing ur really good at it
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