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The tears
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The tears |
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NicoleRocker12367 Junior Member
since 2009-01-07
Posts 12MA, United States |
Can't you see my tears they're so plain can't hide em Baby why can't you quit hurtin me I wish that we could be together you can't see the tears that run down my cheeks I wish we could kiss and make it better but nothin will bring the love back and erase the tears |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I like it. Keep up the writing.  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Enjoyed this piece. Can't wait to see more from you. |
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daddysgurlxx5xx New Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 8 |
i very well enjoyed this poem... keep up the work |
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pandabear Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36 |
keep writing ur really good at it |
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