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yamaha
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since 2010-04-01
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0 posted 2010-04-01 09:04 PM



I must say, Who I was

I must say, I never noticed how selfish I was

Not knowing how I would affect the people around me in such days of sadness and alone,

Only referring and inferring to what I am, to what I do,

Not looking at the ups of every downs yet the fake highs of the sky which cannot be faked

I must say, I am not who I thought of to be

I must say, who am I to be without when I have everything

I must say I am cool, happy, wacky, and smart

Yet don't use it and seem to need a transplant for my heart

I must say I'm not that guy anymore that I thought I was meant to be when I was distorted

I am that guy who is looking out for the world of love

That I have been missing out all my life

Now this chance has been a sign of better days

I now know that I am not what I was before

I am myself the person which I didn’t even dream of being before

They say inspiration lives beneath hope and every motivation

No situation, no circumstances is the leader nation

So graduate yourself high and know that it's you not him or her

Its not that with in you but just you, Love, hate, pain, hardness, strength

I must say I've never experienced these things

Why am I to say I don’t deserve this?

When kid’s everyday have meals missed

I know that I am that beneath and up on the cloud which soars up high

With the angels looking down and praying for my love, affection,

And all those other things we so hard dwell on,

I dwell and start to swell my mind

Racing in a heavy pace yet it seems so down and blank and gone

I have but missed it all along

I am what I was not meant to be, I am my own destiny

In a world where I always used to seek hate or a grudge

Now nothing I can think of such,

And the funny thing is these words that the words I carried around me had no impact at all

Maybe I needed to look deeper so I can maybe make it all along

That life is not about those staring things looking at you or so called

Monsters who are your friends or family, the people that loves you

At least you have those things and you know you have it because you feel it inside you

Forget about the issues, or so called things you think might help you've seen,

Apply them but know that you are keener

Rely on yourself rely on yourself, not as an only child on this beautiful earth but as a the

Person who the lord created in such worth

You may not like yourself in the meantime

But you are still YOU, just know that this thing you have accomplished,

This special gift you have

That not many others have is you.

Do not have this person in you go away at certain times or

At least try embrace and who cares if everyone else you think might think you are

Sway, lame, and not the "right" way

Because for you is the most loving person and let it have missed with, watch you hold it

There are plenty of people that love you come fly and be a dove

Imply you’re self to this theory not being so judgmental on timing yourself

But on letting you go

Why let the media take control of what you think when it is actually you who is in control.

The moment of pause you get in this life is a chance

To show your true qualities and something that is wrong.

Because what you think you are having is a made up story-

For everyone else in this world you are feared to love even more and show

So take out those hidden talents out of you and you know that you have this. Take these words out of this poem and imply,

What seems hate to many of us is just love teachings us in a more hateful way

So that I can’t be missed for love is such a thing that the human needs

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1 posted 2010-04-01 09:46 PM


First of all, welcome to Passions and I am sure you are going to like it here and make lots of friends.

You seem wise beyond your years, and know that learning from other's mistakes only makes you wiser, and a much better person.

A great introspective poem.


madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
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2 posted 2010-04-04 07:14 AM


This is a wonderful poem. I haven’t read one of its standard in quite a long time. Keep it up. I hope to see many more in the future.

P.S. Welcome to Pip

We enjoy warmth because we have been cold.
We appreciate light because we have been in darkness.
By the same token, we can experience joy because

VelvetVampress
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since 2010-04-24
Posts 26

3 posted 2010-05-02 07:15 AM


I love the poem. I wish i had read it back in school it would have helped me to get through some tough times...

~Velvet Vampress~

toriber
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since 2010-06-10
Posts 22
texas
4 posted 2010-06-16 11:09 AM


i really like this one i will deffinetly keep it in mind during those tough time at school!!!!!!  i love it!!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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