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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-03-30 02:02 PM


Whisper, whisper, gossip, giggle.
Pretty girls in high-pitched tizzles.

Look at me, then look away:
the perfect, prim, UN-enchanté.

'Cause they can't stand the way I look,
'Cause I don't read the 'priss-miss book.'

I don't get tips from magazines.
Don't plan my prom from Seventeen.

I don't spend hours in choosing flats.
I don't take bath-salt bubblebaths.

I wear t-shirts, ripped-up jeans;
Flip-flops on sandpaper feet.

I'll dance around in mud and rain,
'Til high-up girls would cringe in pain.

I wear my hair in simple styles
And don't keep boys in "love" beguiles.

I dance the way a real girl should;
For fun and not to "show the goods."

I don't completely keep the rules
That socially would make me "cool."

But I don't really wanna be
The Princess Prep, the big Queen Bee.

I'm cool with what I've got to be.
I'm here, I'm real, I'm simply me.

© Copyright 2010 Melissa Reneé Axtell - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2010-03-30 06:11 PM


that's the way to be Melissa...one should not have to change to  impress someone

M

kjsd
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since 2010-01-07
Posts 74
sd usa
2 posted 2010-03-31 06:58 PM


i really liked this i bet alot of girls could relate to this so good god
Kim
Junior Member
since 2010-03-20
Posts 10
U.K.
3 posted 2010-04-02 10:15 AM


wow I love the poem! great rhyming and love the topic!

x Kim x

Leanne <3
Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
4 posted 2010-05-02 10:12 PM


it's so refreshing to hear of someone so comfortable being themselves!
loved the poem
-Lee

nehematala
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since 2009-05-21
Posts 129

5 posted 2010-05-03 08:25 PM


Messa,
This is amazing as usual
Love ya
Michy

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