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Teen Poetry #9

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2010-03-16 11:12 PM

Blinding thoughts of happiness,
how they consume my mind.
The warmth of the sun,
the smell of the air...
But it's all a waste of time.

I know I can not smile,
it hurts me to pretend.
The ache in my chest,
the tears in my eyes...
My heart needs time to mend.

But winter is almost over,
it's laughter is somewhere far.
Tears will dry,
warmth will come...
and life will leave it's scar.

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-though the last line may imply, this poem is not about death.
Thanks for reading.

EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2010-03-17 01:29 AM

wow amazing write!! i just wanted to read it over and over!
great work

-Lee

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2010-03-17 05:20 PM

Thank you.

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2010-03-19 01:53 AM

Great poem!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

Kim
Junior Member

since 2010-03-20

Posts 10
U.K.

4 posted 2010-03-20 05:11 PM

A great poem, I started reading and it just spoke out to me.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2010-03-21 01:33 PM

great flow. well written.. ENJOYED

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2010-04-05 12:16 PM

I appreciate all your comments. Thank you.

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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