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Teen Poetry #9

Looking to Regret

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

0 posted 2010-03-15 05:15 PM

I'll cry one day,
When you are gone,
And I look back then,
At this song.

I'll cry one day,
When I finally see,
What you and I,
Were supposed to be.

I'll cry one day ,
As this stretch ends,
When I no longer,
Call us friends.

I'll die one day,
Because it'll get too much,
When I can't lean
On my neglected crutch.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-03-17 09:03 AM

That last stanza is awesome.
I liked this.

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

2 posted 2010-03-17 06:17 PM

Thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2010-03-21 07:52 PM

aww really enjoyed this one!

"I'll cry one day ,
As this stretch ends,
When I no longer,
Call us friends"

This stanza just hits home!!
great write
-Lee

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

4 posted 2010-03-22 05:43 AM

Awe thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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