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Teen Poetry #9

Not My Place

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-03-02 09:27 PM

I wore my certain darken shades
That would eventually make me fade
Into the backdrop of the crowd

But the world wouldn't let me go
I was scared to death and believe it so
So I shut my mouth and went by plan

I obeyed their every rule
No matter how I felt like a fool
to shaped myself into their mold

I'd smile and make them believe
That it was honestly making me deceive
Myself. I was so confused

I just felt like I didn't stand a chance
That my pointless acts to entrance
Wasn't anything like me

It's just not my place
To wake up and wear a face
That never seemed to belong to me...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2010-03-03 07:41 PM

I added this to my favorites on dA but I didn't comment so let me just say that this is really, really good. You have become a wonderful writer over the last two years, and I mean that.

Fantastic write,
-Emmalee

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

tiny_ME
Junior Member

since 2008-03-01

Posts 26

2 posted 2010-03-06 02:49 AM

....i like your idea of the darken shades making you fade into the backdrop of the crowd..
great thinking! ;p

unfinishedlife
Junior Member

since 2010-03-06

Posts 22

3 posted 2010-03-06 09:38 PM

Never one's place, but everyone seems to where a face at times. That is for definate.

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