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Teen Poetry #9
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Bridget
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since 2009-07-04
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IOWA, USA.
0 posted 2010-01-18 04:57 PM

The sound of those words
Echo off the walls
Him telling me
He didn't love me at all
He left me there
Standing in the rain
Expecting me to just walk away
From the pain
I stood there wondering
What I did wrong
But all I know is he's almost gone
I feel the tears running down my face
As I watch him walk away
Leaving an empty space.
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1 posted 2010-01-18 10:02 PM

wow, really great write.

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