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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I Sleep And Remain Tired I sleep To forget All the Awful things They say I hug the Bear you gave Me and I Ashamedly let my Tears rain down Only weaklings cry says Too proud inner voice But does that voice Know that I am Too tired to care? My dreams do not aid Me in my search for Peace tonight. And I fear I will be awake till Dawn, wandering my restless mind Screaming ‘peace I cannot find’ This too skinny weakling Has a proud mind That does not care That I still remain Much, much too tired I hug the Bear you gave Me and I Ashamedly let my Tears rain down I sleep And Hope I forget What they Said tonight I Sleep And Remain Exhausted |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
awesome poem, definitely going into my library! ~Leah |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Hey, it's been a while... I could really relate to this. Except usually I don't actually get the sleep... Normally, I'd say it was lengthy, but I'd be totally wrong. Good, concise use of words. There is power in the pen. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Ha! I liked they way you started this out.. Why did you use tired in the first one and exhausted in the last? |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Like most of the things I write, it's a story, or a process of emotions, if you will. Like, the longer something is able to bother you, the more drained, the more defeated you become. Thanks, ya'll. |
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