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A ghosts reqiuem
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A ghosts reqiuem |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I came here because noone will see It is only for those who do not know me Or will not have any resonance to my words I am alone I created this reality through my own decisions each right in its own way So I fear My life collapses I have little remaining Fake hope from a empty source I am unwanted It is as it should be I am less than I was much less than I could have been I am a faint outline An unfilled void emptied of life unfulfilled incapable of joy of fun friendless I am the unwanted I am who I chose to be Unloved, incapable of love I am reviled and rightfully so I am dead inside I am the snow, the earth I am beauty and I sleep the final sleep under the stars Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
"I am a faint outline" i really like this line! |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
An extraordinary amount of depth in your writing. Whether real or imagined from the pen's perspective, the human drama within your work is strikingly real. The last few lines seem to soften the blow somewhat, but all that moves toward the end is quite powerful. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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