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madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2013-06-03 08:20 PM



He’s not in the right frame of mind
Rewind
Go back to another life
Where he
Wasn’t the cause of all this mess
Confess
It isn’t true is it
He made you his toy
Oh boy
You’re in trouble now
You’re in trouble
You’re in
You’re
You’re in his thoughts
Caught
Between the love and the hate
Oh great
Someone has to rescue me
See
Can’t you see
Can’t you hear
My fear
I’m screaming out for help
I’m yelling for redemption
Exemption
From the rules
He made
Oh god help me he’s here
The fear
Help
Redemption
Exemption
Help

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

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Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
1 posted 2013-10-12 04:21 PM


brings many things to mind which would be a reflection of where I have been in my life so..... for me and many others Powerful write......

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2014-01-08 06:57 PM


Anxious and fearful. Adrenaline raising progressions held my interest throughout.

...just bein' Bluesy

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