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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
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0 posted 2009-02-09 06:31 PM



A little while ago,
I wanted nothing to do with you.
Right now I can not stop thinking
About you.
We were good but we were not real.
Closeness and comfort is what
We had dear. You were mine and
I was yours.
Separated, hearts no longer interwined.
Woven together with two separate
Vines.
Your happy and now so am I.
Everything would work out, we
Promised each other that.
To see you smile, I no longer
Desire for.
Too see you, I have stopped
Counting the minutes.
You are gone, disappeared, and
Far away. I like you there.

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Suncleaver
Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
1 posted 2009-02-09 06:49 PM


A sad message, I empathised until you wrote 'I like you there'. I personally wish I could gather all the love I've ever shared back to me and be whole again.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-02-17 08:59 AM


Enjoyed..Very sad.
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