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0 posted 2012-01-21 12:39 PM



This hurt is taking me apart; deep inside I am burning,
Wishing the clock can be turned back, stopping the tears,
Holding back my fear, never thought I would go through this,
Alone I go, for I like the way it feels, the emotions running through me,
Feeding me nothing but pain, I drown within myself, gasping for nothingness,
Keeping my composure, my mind starts to ramble, but my lips never part,
Until I pen them down tonight, a sense of relief washes me,
Unloading part of my burden, I don’t feel any lighter,
Should keep this between myself and these lines, and not let the world in,
I don’t want your pity, or your sympathy, just remember I need to go through this,
Felt so bad about what happened, but failed to own up to any of it,
Now I can’t regret the choices I made, only relive what I know through these rhymes,
The pain will subside over time, but until then I continue to pen these words,
For they keep me away from my emotional hearth, until the spark subsides,
Kindling a new distraction, and then once again I return to this stage,
Knowing I’m not perfect, swallowing that truth is all I can do now.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2012 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2012-01-21 08:23 AM


Wow... Absolutely wonderful! To my library with this I love this poem, it may be one of my new favorites!
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2 posted 2012-08-09 04:17 PM


"Keeping my composure, my mind starts to ramble, but my lips never part"

God knows i live this...a strong poem...a deep impact

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