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Angels Fall
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since 2011-10-31
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0 posted 2011-12-04 05:32 PM



I believed that there was a future between he and I
I bathed in every word his wicked tongue spoke
My first love...and only... I believed.
Yet who was I to him?
Just another game he played.
My love for him never got through.
Just one sided feelings... yet I told myself he loved me.
Why is it that my feelings ring on deaf ears?
Why did I fall so easily?
For those leaf green eyes... and soft hair.
Oh how I wanted his lips to meet mine.
We were perfect together- or so I was told.
We had a future together... my misconceived feelings
My tears falls on blind eyes
He won't even bat an eye
How was SHE any better than me?
She only wanted him to get to me.

Hopeless...
Helpless...
Heartbroken...
He is no more to me.
I want to forget about him...
But can't... when there's something growing inside of me.
A few months later my stomach gets big.
I tell myself it's nothing, I just eat like a pig.
But it appears that I've past the test.
A spark of hope wells up inside me.
Just maybe this will fix everything... we'll be a family.
I tell him and he laughs calling me horrible words.
Of course the child cannot possibly be yours!
This was not what was supposed to happen.
He was supposed to support me... we were supposed to be a family.
Again with my one-sided misconceived feelings...
Of course that jerk would ditch me.

Just let me get one thing straight,
In no way was my daughter a mistake.
The mistake I made was sleeping with a jerk, who'll probably never see his daughter again.
I just really hope that you've learned from my mistakes.
I was young and naive, I was too caught up in a happy ending.
I was forced to grow up and start acting like an adult.
All because of what I wanted to believe.

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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
1 posted 2011-12-07 06:47 PM


i can really feel your emotions through this i think the flow needs a little spit in polish though

yolilitzli

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