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LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-10-31 07:38 PM

I just want someone to care.
That is all I ask.
I want someone to look at me
and notice something other then
my clothes, my makeup, my hair.
I want someone to get to know me,
Love me.
I want a guy to actually care about me,
go out of his way to smile at me and single me out
as different, as important, as his.
I want to be held by hands that are soft and careful,
not hungry and impatient.
I want to be acknowledged for my efforts.
I spend all this time being beautiful and sexy--
but guys only look,
they don't actually care.
And I hate it.
I hate that I can't have someone
who will hold me and love me
when I know I'm beautiful inside and out.
Because all they do is look at the outside
and don't give a damn about the inside.
I wish I could have one guy
who would do anything for me,
anything to have me,
make me happy and safe.
But I can't,
all because of one little black heart
etched onto my wrist
by one hateful, disgusting guy
who had to destroy me in every single way he could.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2011-10-31 07:50 PM

One must seek inwards for what can be done to get oneself out of such situation. Time heals, however it depends how much a person needs it.Nice write. I have been there in the past to some level.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-10-31 07:57 PM

wow amazing i can somehow relate to it it brought back to my past life (by the way i never dated)

Angels Fall
Junior Member

since 2011-10-31

Posts 11
United States

3 posted 2011-10-31 10:46 PM

I can DEFINITELY relate to this poem and you. I was deeply in love with a guy, but apparently I wasn't good enough for him and he cheated on me. Yes, men are most inconsiderant.

I can only take so much before I love you starts to sound like a lie.

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