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since 2011-01-30
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0 posted 2011-10-31 07:38 PM

I just want someone to care.
That is all I ask.
I want someone to look at me 
and notice something other then 
my clothes, my makeup, my hair.
I want someone to get to know me,
Love me.
I want a guy to actually care about me,
go out of his way to smile at me and single me out
as different, as important, as his.
I want to be held by hands that are soft and careful,
not hungry and impatient.
I want to be acknowledged for my efforts.
I spend all this time being beautiful and sexy--
but guys only look,
they don't actually care.
And I hate it.
I hate that I can't have someone
who will hold me and love me
when I know I'm beautiful inside and out.
Because all they do is look at the outside
and don't give a damn about the inside.
I wish I could have one guy
who would do anything for me,
anything to have me,
make me happy and safe.
But I can't, 
all because of one little black heart
etched onto my wrist
by one hateful, disgusting guy
who had to destroy me in every single way he could.

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1 posted 2011-10-31 07:50 PM

One must seek inwards for what can be done to get oneself out of such situation. Time heals, however it depends how much a person needs it.Nice write. I have been there in the past to some level.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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2 posted 2011-10-31 07:57 PM

wow amazing i can somehow relate to it it brought back to my past life (by the way i never dated)
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since 2011-10-31
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3 posted 2011-10-31 10:46 PM

I can DEFINITELY relate to this poem and you. I was deeply in love with a guy, but apparently I wasn't good enough for him and he cheated on me. Yes, men are most inconsiderant.

I can only take so much before I love you starts to sound like a lie.

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