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Dark Poetry #5

someplace much like here

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2011-07-19 11:44 PM

someplace
that resembles here,
with blue skies by day,
glitterng star at night,
someplace
that resembles here,
theres a guy in tears,
all because of one,
because of you,
his fear has come true.
someplace
that resembles here
theres a girl shedding tears,
here there everywhere
thier shedding tears.

yolilitzli

LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-08-01 12:55 PM

This is interesting. I enjoyed it however I feel that you never really let it go. I have read a few of your poems now and I believe that they hold a lot of potential, you just need to open up completely. I like this poem, keep writing!

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2011-08-16 10:06 PM

im still trying to figure out my style in a way

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

3 posted 2011-09-04 08:36 PM

i like the simplicity of this poem. leaves so much to one's own interpretation. and where is this place? i have to be sure i don't journey there.

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

4 posted 2011-09-04 10:58 PM

well its someplace much like here lol

yolilitzli

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