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chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Summer winds have blown away A solitary wolf's lonely cries Wishing the wind would come again To dry his teary eyes The time ticks by around a clock The sun is less every day Inside the trees know to there cores That Autumn is on the way The nights get colder with each moonrise And confirm all of their fears So they shed all the covers And sudder as their leaves fall like multicolored tears. Blackwidowgurl |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
hmmmm makes me thoughtfull |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This makes me happy, happy that you wrote it. There is everything good to say and nothing lacking. It's on track, crammed with meaning, and as the above reader spoke, creates an attitude of thoughtfulness and reflection in the most beautifully imaginable way. And while more than one verse or set stood out to me, this one spoke first in it's exquisitely purposeful time loop which recaptured, and then renewed the use of an excellently artistic element- "Summer winds have blown away A solitary wolf's lonely cries Wishing the wind would come again To dry his teary eyes" ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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