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LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-06-02 06:02 PM



Everything is different-
     different to different people.
  People hate...
      hate what is different.
  What is different hates.
          But why?
     Why hate?
     Why Make things hate?
Everything is different-
     different to different people.
  People blame...
     blame what is different.
  What is different blames.
          But why?
     Why blame?
     Why Need things to be blamed?
Everything is different-
     different to different people.
  People kill...
     kill what is different.
  What is different kills.
          But why?
     Why kill?
     Why Allow things to kill?
Everything is different-
     different to different people.
  People stop...
     stop Making thing different.
  What is different does not Need to stop.
          Who cares?
     Why Allow this?
     Why think that it is okay to
          hate, to
               blame, to
                    kill?
Everything is different-
     different to different people.
                    Get over it.

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ponderthepoetorrsx
Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
1 posted 2011-06-25 04:00 AM


the concept reminds me of a poem called evolution? dont know if thats the right title its religious though but very nice first line is a jellyfish and a saurian a crystal and a cell...
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-06-28 07:47 PM


Reminds me of why I've always thought LaGraceLa to be an up and coming "must see" Poetess of unequaled excellence. Before long, there will be nothing you are unable to write extremely well about.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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