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Dark Poetry #5

To love too much

littlemonster
Junior Member

since 2010-05-06

Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2011-05-22 11:35 AM

What happens when you love somebody too much?
When the feelings are too strong
And then when they are gone,
When everything you know has disappeared.
When what was good and brought light to your day
Has all of a sudden gone astray.
When thoughts are no longer enough.
What happens when you love somebody too much?

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2011-05-23 10:35 PM

i love it i can feel your feelings especially when you love someone so much that they just disappear out of your life like pass away i love my grandma and she passed away i still love her and i miss her so thats why i can feel your feelings i never had a boyfreind or anything but still i can feel this pain

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-05-28 09:34 PM

I too, feel this poem and you know how I feel about that, Queen Monster. This is one of the longest poems I've ever seen. Of yours. I love it and it's traditionally perfect, in your perfect way. My Lady.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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