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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2011-04-12 09:32 AM



~I wrote this for a close friend of mine. He had just lost someone special to him.~

You sit by in silence
The only sounds
A gunshot ringing in your ears
Your best friend's breath
Slowly slipping away
Just like your soul
Just like your life...

A river of blood
Awaits you at the end of the road
The only sounds...
Screams of those who feed the river
Cries of those you left behind.

~I'd love to know ways I can improve, so please comment.~

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