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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-02-28 05:35 PM



Life is full of mistakes
and
you never have what it takes
to rise above it all & shine,
to love & act like everything is fine.

Life is full of despair,
everyone thinks they don't care
about the sick, about the dying,
no one thinks it is worth trying.

Life is full of hate
& death is our fate
& when we die then so must they
because of this, all will pay.

Life is full of jealousy
& your blind eyes will never see
that you cause more bad than good,
you turn hearts to nothing more than wood.

Life is full of needs
& love is never as it seams
because we all want something more
so we'll wait in line at hell's door.

Life is full of selfishness
& no one wants to miss
the best part of all the things
they only want themselves to have wings.

Life is full of laws
creativeness  grasped in cold jaws
that will never let you go
so the real you will never show.

Life is full of fight
death & screams ringing in the night
from the children and the wives
cut down by bloody knives.

© Copyright 2011 Sarah Grace - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-03-22 11:55 PM


Another naturally well penned piece, done with intelligence and thoughtfulness. But as for me, when someone gets up under my skin like that I just shriek that I don't have to listen to their junk, they're only 76.3% water.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-04-30 04:48 PM


looooooove it
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