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chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
It burns and churns deep inside the darkness that I try to hide It fights and fights to break free that darkness caged inside of me Im afraid I will lose control when worldly stress corrodes my soul Help me world when Im afraid so that those I love will come out unscathed Need some way to heal this tear Its so hard to try and care My heart hardens, my tears freeze No more fire to appease now just a dark cold that is centuries old help me my heart beats slower help me before it takes me over. Blackwidowgurl [This message has been edited by chylenedoney (02-09-2011 08:39 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very well done! A cry for help on a familiar topic, and starkly truthful. |
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Britt_Brat Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37Knoxville, TN |
i really like this. i feel the same way at times. Lost & wondering till I'm found |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Blood curdling writing. I love it! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Absolutly marvelous. When I read a poem that gives me words to that feeling, that hurt, I am moved. Every line you wrote, every word you said... They all fit. It is a marvelous feeling when you find words as beautiful as yours that click, that are what you need. I'm sorry if that does not make a whole lot of sence, I can not think of how to word it better... Just know that I love it  |
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