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Dark Poetry #5

Quiet

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-02-01 04:53 PM

Silence... hopes and fears never told.
Silence... trust and love never sold.
Silence... ringing in the night.
Silence... going down without a fight.
Silence... never having a true voice.
Silence... darkness without a choice.
Silence... hearts that never say how they feel.
Silence... life that can't cope, cant deal.
Silence... children's way of saying, 'help us please'.
Silence... crying and begging on our knees.
Silence... God's only action.
Silence... Hell's brand new fashion.
Silence... screaming out for peace.
Silence... come find me please.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-02-01 09:48 PM

This is excellent in it's ability to provoke thought and conjure depth in those reflections. Very meaningful. It also has a lot of very basic human moments formed in a question.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

[This message has been edited by XGarapanX (02-02-2011 02:19 AM).]

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-02-02 02:23 AM

I also like the layout and presentation on this piece. That gives it star power and creativity points. Good solid piece.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

HippinTrippy
Member

since 2010-03-26

Posts 103
New York

3 posted 2011-02-27 03:00 PM

Beautiful! ~ Garapan actualy said it quite well. I love the room for thought and imagination, I am willing to bet this can be interpreted several different ways..

~ Thank you for sharing. =)

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

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