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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-01-30 07:10 PM



i can handle hell
i can survive hurt
i can live with disappointment, and
i can deal with doubt.
you can beat me down
you can distroy my pride
you can abolish my hope, and
you can dismantle my dreams.

But I will survive.

i just ask one thing...

i do not fear death
i do by run from pain
i do not scream at agony, or
cringe when hit.

But walls...

walls surrounding me,
keeping me,
locking me in.

That

i can not handle.
do as you wish,
but please, I beg you,
do not place me where light
never comes shining down. and
do not jail me in the iron bars of hell.

Free...

I need to be free.

Please, do not cage me.


© Copyright 2011 Sarah Grace - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-31 11:38 PM


There you are. This is the poetry I was looking for. Powerful. Passionate. Provoking, and all infused with a fiery spirit. Excellent.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
2 posted 2011-02-01 04:38 PM


Thank you, honestly it makes me so happy to know that I am able to write poetry. I love reading it, but I could never find ones that were what I... needed, in a way. So this is my attempt at it, and thank you for telling me that I'm cabaple of writing. It really does mean alot, so thank you.
HippinTrippy
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since 2010-03-26
Posts 103
New York
3 posted 2011-02-27 02:57 PM


I enjoyed this quite a bit. You have a unique style and I love it.
~Keep them coming!

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2011-03-24 03:54 PM


My pleasure, Poetess.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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