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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2009-01-22 10:45 AM



I Am


I am a daughter and a friend
I wonder who I am
I hear my mothers cry
I see my sister’s smile
I want to be free
I am a daughter and a friend

I pretend to be correct
I feel mistaken
I touch my face wet with pity
I worry too much
I cry inside
I am a daughter and a friend

I understand my feelings
I say I’m ok
I dream of happiness
I try to be me
I hope I am believed
I am a daughter and a friend


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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
1 posted 2009-01-22 08:54 PM


A touching poem. Sometimes burdens are hard for us to bear so we seek solace where we can find it.

You are no doubt a praiseworthy daughter and a true friend.

wwzwlmd8
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since 2006-09-23
Posts 96
San Diego,CA
2 posted 2009-01-22 10:29 PM


i love this poem and i really loved reading it

~Indya

angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
3 posted 2009-03-18 12:36 PM


thank you

Brittany

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