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Chavo.wavo
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since 2010-11-13
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0 posted 2010-11-13 01:53 PM



Tears fell from my face.
They crashed to the floor.
my father was gone.
Like he walked out the door.
But i knew one thing. He wouldnt be back.
He wasnt returning.
Hed fallen through the crack.
The crack in my heart.
When he never returned.
I couldnt stop crying.
My heart had been burned.
The tears kept coming.
They flowed all day.
Until they were all gone.
And they had melted away.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-11-13 04:08 PM


Chavo,

Welcome to Passions. A sad poem, indeed.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 2010-11-18 11:31 PM


welcome to Passions
great first post. Nice flow!!
hope to read more soon
Krysti

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