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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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Sometimes there is so much inside that I don't know what to do with it I don't know how to think How to feel How to find my way out It's simply a big black cloud that sticks to my soul... and clings to my fingertips Staining my hands like ink And I don't know what to do with it I don't know where to put it Or how to rid myself of it Most of the time I act like it's not there... I'm so accustomed to ignoring it I try not to think of it But I find that I use these hands tainted in that ink to write on the pages of my life... Though I don't like to think of what it says Sometimes there is so much inside that it's like there's nothing at all... Nothing but the cloud and that ink And the way that I pretend that nothing at all is wrong If I don't say it...who will? |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Well written and like the flow of words. Do look forward to seeing more of your work here. Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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SunshineandraiN New Member
since 2010-11-17
Posts 5 |
Oh my gosh! I have felt the same way for so long, but I could never put it into words. I loved the whole thing, but especially the part where you talk about that there's so much inside that it seems like there's nothing at all. Thanks so much for posting this! I can't wait to see more! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thank you both for taking the time to "listen" to my thoughts. I appreciate it. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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lahre New Member
since 1999-12-19
Posts 5kuala lumpur,Malaysia |
I like it a lot!! |
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Chavo.wavo Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15 |
An honest and beautiful flow. Great job I loved every word. |
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bigthinker8 Junior Member
since 2010-11-22
Posts 19Chicago Il |
I am very familiar with this. You have captured my thoughts wonderfully, thank you! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thank you all so much. This was one of those pieces that I didn't know if anyone would "get"... If I don't say it...who will? |
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Weeping willow Junior Member
since 2010-08-29
Posts 13Mississippi |
This was well written.Enjoyed reading this poem,gave me a smile as I read this poem. |
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