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Dark Poetry #5

Nightmares

chylenedoney
Junior Member

since 2010-10-14

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2010-10-14 05:30 PM

Shattered glass falls from the sky
I look up and wonder why?
The jagged shards shred my skin
I can't win.

blood falls in steady streams
I cover my face and scream
children with souls the color of mud
dip their daggered fingers in my blood

I try so hard to hide my fear
but the more I try the more scared I appear
but I wake up and discover it was fake
for it was a mother's hands that shook me awake.

Blackwidowgurl

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-10-15 12:22 PM

Nightmares are a purge. They're not much fun, especially when chemical toxins are involved. Can be interesting sometimes, though...

This poem is a good read and an interesting one. Welcome to the forums!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-10-15 05:17 AM

Ooh. I like the imagery. the last lines were great. Welcome to PIP

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2010-10-15 09:53 AM

Welcome to Passions, Chylene...

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" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

FloraScars
Junior Member

since 2010-11-08

Posts 33
VA, USA

4 posted 2010-12-08 08:24 PM

this poem is wonderful! i really like it! (:

wolfy09
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

5 posted 2010-12-11 12:50 PM

Beautiful! welcome to pip

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

6 posted 2010-12-16 05:18 PM

good write
nightmares are scary :/

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