Dark Poetry #5 |
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Still in this darkness |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
When has my heart not been frozen? On ice for eons it seems, I wonder aloud and I feel beset, are love's promises petrified dreams? Fearful not to be silent. Thinking too little too late.Destiny a term resented, but maybe this is my fate. To speak plainly aloud I'd only say this, open your heart love, send me your kiss. For perhaps I will thaw from this icy tomb, re-spun upon a gentle loom. When care in thought,and heart, and hands, renews and becomes recompense. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I cannot help but chuckle inaudibly at the author leaving the rhyme scheme at the last here, I guess to the riddle of the future. This after I searched the work several times for a rhyme, or even for an assonance corespondlngly placed to "recompense". ![]() Enjoyed. As for the subject, what can I say except if word comes to you from an unexpected source on such a matter, don't a priori shut it out. Please at least investigate... For time does hurry on. |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
@easy1: I think I was at the point where I said, close enough. The word felt right. I imagine it rhymes. =) Sort of...? Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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