Dark Poetry #5 |
An Angel Walks the Stone Halls of Death |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is my first post, so I'd like to greet you all warmly and say that I welcome any comments. An Angel Walks the Stone Halls of Death Alone I sit encased in ice upon a throne of skulls In this narrow hall let no joyful voice be heard Inside my glacial tomb the flame of my heart grows dim I hear the soothing siren song of death calling my name But I am paralysed with cold and weighed down with grief I have long forsaken escaping the dreadful work of my own hands Softly the gentle ring of footsteps echoes in the distance Who dares enter my barrow? Who dares profane the silence of my hall? I close my eyes secure in the knowledge that all portals are sealed Sealed by the cold black ice seeping from my wounds Amidst a flurry of opalescent wings an angel appears before me A blazing seraph of radiant light carrying a crimson lance The pure white fires of her blessed life melt the terrible ice And I am left stricken naked and breathless as I struggle to stand Softly the angel smiles and plunges the crimson lance into my chest A single rivulet of heart's blood trickle's from the wound I fall limply into the arms of the blessed one Is this the coming end? Or perhaps the embrace of salvation On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Amazing. Truely amazing. midnightdreamer She past you, but doesn't notice you. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you very much for your kind comment. I look forward greatly to seeing some of your own work. It is truly comforting to be recieved so warmly. On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Inside my glacial tomb the flame of my heart grows dim I hear the soothing siren song of death calling my name But I am paralysed with cold and weighed down with grief I have long forsaken escaping the dreadful work of my own hands" That did it for me. Very nice read. Nice visuals, deep tone. Good write. Keep'em coming bud. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Wow, fantastic first post! And im awestruck by ur title! this is going in my library. I'll be reading more. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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