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Dark Poetry #5

Healing

Novus_Os
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 115
West Coast, USA

0 posted 2010-08-12 08:29 AM

Injured in soul, and with corporal felt pain.
Clouded by sorrow, slowly tears build like rain.
Can I still overcome my disdain? Will clear
views be seen through my heart's window pane?
Perhaps my self doubt has made all success vain.
Perhaps I'll remain cripple, hobbling down love lane.
I must try to stay focused or be driven insane.
Hear the truthful note found in life's brutal refrain.
When I have fallen, I must rise once again.
Let healing begin, and peace not restrain.

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

[This message has been edited by Novus_Os (08-14-2010 12:56 PM).]

in hyacinth blue
Junior Member

since 2008-08-27

Posts 15

1 posted 2010-08-30 06:39 PM

If we can hold on long enough, the healing WILL begin. Good write!

Swisha
Junior Member

since 2009-07-22

Posts 32

2 posted 2010-09-01 11:02 PM

I thought that was very well written. Not many can write with the same rhyme that long without it sounding forced. You didn't force it, and it went well with your whole idea. Nicely done

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