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NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09
Posts 107


0 posted 2010-08-03 01:26 PM


’cause I understand
I’m a scar on your broken body,
but you′re still beautiful
as time passes
The wounds become a sickness,
your doors become walls
the mirror hurts
I’ll reach my hand out to you
When all the world is closed
The suffering that was reflected like stars
become your city of fragmented glass
Your breath ends before my heart
I want to see them pour out
Wound, Scar, Tears
wandering through death
without reason
still dreaming
measuring the hope that falls away
your mirage
Maybe you'll wake up to consciousness
crawling on the floor
letting go of the tears you’ve hidden away

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-03-03 08:01 PM


Very beautiful and heartfelt. I loved it
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-03-24 04:55 PM


I must concur. Beautiful beautiful beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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