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charlesmdodson New Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 8CA, USA |
Dis-Stain When you splattered my blood on the walls I was afraid The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran... For months I watched it dry and change... Crimson and bright to dark and dank... For years I simply stared- Too beset to comprehend, too confined to move. And then I saw you for the creature you are. And I drenched the blood with water... Buckets and buckets of water until red flowed anew... And I dug my fingers into the pain until they bled And I drew and I painted in frantic patterns With an abandon so foreign... As if all was purged and nothing was left... And I giggled with glee like a pardoned madman As I drew and painted and laughed and bled… |
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Dis-Stain When you splattered my blood on the walls I was afraid The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran... For months I watched it dry and change... Crimson and bright to dark and dank... For years I simply stared- Too beset to comprehend, too confined to move. And then I saw you for the creature you are. And I drenched the blood with water... Buckets and buckets of water until red flowed anew... And I dug my fingers into the pain until they bled And I drew and I painted in frantic patterns With an abandon so foreign... As if all was purged and nothing was left... And I giggled with glee like a pardoned madman As I drew and painted and laughed and bled…" Visuals of a dark pain and abandonment Very nice. "The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran..." ILLL!!! I loved that line man. You did great on your choice of wordplay. Keep at it. |
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charlesmdodson New Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 8CA, USA |
Thank you man.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You make me think of Jackson Pollet... very interesting read. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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charlesmdodson New Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 8CA, USA |
Thank you. |
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