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charlesmdodson
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0 posted 2009-01-16 09:53 PM



Dis-Stain
When you splattered my blood on the walls I was afraid
The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran...
For months I watched it dry and change...
Crimson and bright to dark and dank...
For years I simply stared-
Too beset to comprehend, too confined to move.
And then I saw you for the creature you are.
And I drenched the blood with water...
Buckets and buckets of water until red flowed anew...
And I dug my fingers into the pain until they bled
And I drew and I painted in frantic patterns
With an abandon so foreign...
As if all was purged and nothing was left...
And I giggled with glee like a pardoned madman
As I drew and painted and laughed and bled…


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1 posted 2009-01-20 10:05 AM


"Dis-Stain
When you splattered my blood on the walls I was afraid
The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran...
For months I watched it dry and change...
Crimson and bright to dark and dank...
For years I simply stared-
Too beset to comprehend, too confined to move.
And then I saw you for the creature you are.
And I drenched the blood with water...
Buckets and buckets of water until red flowed anew...
And I dug my fingers into the pain until they bled
And I drew and I painted in frantic patterns
With an abandon so foreign...
As if all was purged and nothing was left...
And I giggled with glee like a pardoned madman
As I drew and painted and laughed and bled…"

Visuals of a dark pain and abandonment
Very nice.

"The running red patterns traumatized me and I ran..."
ILLL!!!
I loved that line man.

You did great on your choice of wordplay.
Keep at it.

charlesmdodson
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2 posted 2009-01-20 08:25 PM


Thank you man.  
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3 posted 2009-02-05 11:09 AM


You make me think of Jackson Pollet...
very interesting read.

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charlesmdodson
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4 posted 2009-02-05 08:30 PM


Thank you.  
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