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Dark Poetry #5

Dark Vase - Vanish

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-04-21 12:04 PM

sleeplessness, the inside;
window shines of nightmare dreams;
inside my room all alone with little dark things.

a mystery, plays the dark and passes on its demonic laugh;
there is no sadder wind that shakes me of my pain;
like a corpse, dust to dust,
the trees, in tireless air,

a sentence- no words - but a sacrifice,
in a turning wheel from the faceless air,

a drowning night in moonless face;
in water - in dark and vanish;
a place where a soul dies like flowers on hardwood;
a graveyard.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-04-21 01:13 AM

Loved this piece, and especially your closing two lines. They portrayed a gradual death perfectly.

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

2 posted 2010-04-23 05:54 PM

Thnks, Mysteria.

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