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Dark Poetry #5

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angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2010-03-02 11:23 PM

The Curiosity Invading My Mind
Isolated And Scared
Not Yet Untied
Searching To Be Shown
To Whom I'm Unknown
The Souls Considering Cost
Thriving On Love
Untamed And Peacefully Lost

Brittany

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2010-03-03 05:26 PM

Hey Brit. Nice write, haven't seen you around here for a long time.

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-03-04 11:53 AM

This is awesome.

I liked your rhyming scheme.

These lines were powerful stuff:

The Souls Considering Cost
Thriving On Love
Untamed And Peacefully Lost

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

3 posted 2010-07-09 08:30 PM

Nicely done, though an odd choice of capitalisation - I'd like to know the significance.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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