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kjsd
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since 2010-01-07
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0 posted 2010-01-17 04:04 PM



               ALL ALONE IN THIS WORLD

all alone no sound
all alone no fun
all alone i cant take it
all alone its wirded
all alone come and take me
all alone not for long
all alone the angles came
all alone no more im with you know
your my angle
all alone no more

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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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1 posted 2010-01-17 05:23 PM


Thanks for sharing.  What's wirded mean?  Also, how does someone become another person's angle?  I am not sure I understand the meaning behind comparing a human being to a measurement of the number of degrees at the intersection between two lines on a plane.

Anyway, like the repetition.


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