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loveyourself102 Junior Member
since 2009-10-11
Posts 48 |
again.... why? it happened again... we were great, you were great, but it happened again. what little was left of my emotions, soul, and heart you took... it happened again... never again... thats what you said.. never again will anyone break you... you said you would save me, cath me, but you only pushed me down. and with that im left with nothing.. again.. it happened.. should i lock away my love? should i never again trust? should i do nothing feel nothing? well i dont know.. but im do all this right no because it happened, again.. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sadly life may even repeat this again, but we rise from it all the stronger. Nicely done. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
I enjoyed it but I wondered if there was a significance in the lack of capital letters. Not saying that it is wrong, I just wondered if you were using it to add to the effect or..? Because I sometimes use expressive punctuation/grammar. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I can definitely relate!! thanks~!! Kate |
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