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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
Posts 48


0 posted 2009-12-07 09:27 AM



again....
why?
it happened again...
we were great,
you were great,
but it happened again.
what little was left of my emotions,
soul, and heart you took...
it happened again...
never again...
thats what you said..
never again will anyone break you...
you said you would save me,
cath me, but you only pushed me down.
and with that im left with nothing..
again..
it happened..
should i lock away my love?
should i never again trust?
should i do nothing feel nothing?
well i dont know..
but im do all this right no because it happened,
again..

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1 posted 2009-12-07 02:08 PM


Sadly life may even repeat this again, but we rise from it all the stronger.  Nicely done.
Stitches
Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
2 posted 2009-12-11 06:59 AM


I enjoyed it but I wondered if there was a significance in the lack of capital letters.

Not saying that it is wrong, I just wondered if you were using it to add to the effect or..?

Because I sometimes use expressive punctuation/grammar.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2009-12-16 03:29 AM


I can definitely relate!! thanks~!!

Kate

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