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20toes
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA

0 posted 2009-11-24 06:01 PM


Blackness

Darkness within me

The pain all around

Nothing but anger

Is all that I've found

I feel so mad

All of the time

Like at any moment

I will commit the unthinkable crime

I must continue

To breathe in and out

Even though all I can do

Is scream and shout

I see this person

This soul I've become

The anger is building

My heart starts to drum

If I don't hold back

And try to stay calm

I will give up the world

And empty my palm

I hate this person

I am starting to see

How did this happen

Happen to me

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

© Copyright 2009 Beth Wright - All Rights Reserved
QuietAstronomer
Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18
North Carolina, USA
1 posted 2009-12-13 10:13 PM


Deeply close to home!
Sans medication, it would be me.
Truly written, and well.
Thank you.
QA

m48
Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108

2 posted 2009-12-15 03:41 PM


nicly written. deep and very expressive.wow.
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