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Desirer4New
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0 posted 2009-11-22 11:07 PM



walking in the street
walking in the dust
i scream at the sky
i do not know why
i am angry
and i am sad
look around for something to grab onto
because im falling
down onto the bright green grass
colors are turning and slowly swirling
around around
my head is pounding
laying on the ground
laying in the dirt
my heart stays bound
continual pain and hurt
all these colors are making me sick
sit me up
stand me on my feet
and send me back down the street.

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20toes
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA
1 posted 2009-11-23 01:46 PM


I really like this piece of work...it is so real and lets you feel the character's pain...great piece of work here!

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

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