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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
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0 posted 2009-10-25 10:06 PM


you called.
you said you were sorry about how things ended,
you said you hoped i could forgive you.
i asked why,
you said because i still love you.
i spat on the ground, hung up and walked away.
the world doesnt revole around you.
it doesnt favor you in any way.
in fact i think it hates you,
i never knew the world and i had so much in common.
i should have more faith,
then again i met you,
so how great could the world really be,
if its full of people like you and me?
so i ask myself everyday,
am i really that that great?
i do suppose thats why you got bored of me.
thats why you left,
left me with my cold dead dreams,hopes,and most of all, my soul.

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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
Posts 48

1 posted 2009-10-25 10:11 PM


my ex called tuesday nd after i hung up i started crying nd thinking and i thought of this
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2009-10-25 10:51 PM


i hate it when someone says that to you. very well written!


loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
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3 posted 2009-10-25 11:00 PM


thanks midnightdreamer. i hate it too obviously ;P
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