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Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-01-07 01:24 PM


My cerebral vein is pumping.
With thoughts considered 'inhumane'
While I am forced to watch Mr. McCain’s ad Campaign
My spit reign's ill.
Like a disease from a transmute
I read poems; my 'lips' never stop...
So do you consider 'Def' a Prostitute?
Like Marley and his Marijuana,
my metaphors are 'dope'.
Consider me the Pope!
Cause I read dark flows and call it 'Scriptures'!
If you were in charge of the poets realm.
Would you have infinite missiles?
Would your potential be endless?
Would your giftness be serial?
If you were Columbine minded
would your poems get rewinded?
With spirits at its highness,
the miracle of text is like water to wine
When a shrine fills with flows...
leaked from spines!

A spine gripped in a talon
is what sits on my crown.
I don’t hold records
but I can scratch with the vinyl down
I frown and bust shots that hit with the first shell
Than grab a pen and write a verse
next to the dirt where it fell
In my death-blow stance,
watching the ghetto's expanse,
I can see shadows dance
Consider it Castro the way I advance
with a sword, a horse and a lance!
This grammatical arrangement of words
is my relevance
Since adolescence,
the brilliance of my rhymes left me in amazement
Weather demonic or celestial,
they dexterously enforce their disposition
Like gestures generating kinetics,
ultimately inducin' literacy

Technically,
my vocabulary has its own soul
that has yall feelin' it deeply
A lyrical labyrinth of invective poetry
locked in an analytical review
Is the review given by all of you.
Did these lines give yall an evil grin?
Did I kill it like 'Liddel'
when he took that shot to the chin?
When I click 'submit'
Will the outcome be passive?
Will yall be supportive?
Will yeah go on to the next drop lickety split?
Or will yeah digest these words
as if they were God's 'writ'?

© Copyright 2009 Brian M. Caouette - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2009-01-07 03:20 PM


amazing. truely amazing.
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

young_blood
Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
2 posted 2009-01-08 08:21 AM


This is good. I've been listening to lots of dubstep lately, so the dark flow of this coincided with the dark beats in my headphones.
Def-init
Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
3 posted 2009-01-08 01:30 PM


Thx again for the feed bro.
If your interested in flow. Check out Vol 2
or my "Dark Soul" drop.

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