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Dark Poetry #5

Apathy

drunkenirishpoet
New Member

since 2009-09-04

Posts 7
Franklin, NH USA

0 posted 2009-09-04 10:08 PM

Apathy awaits
without a sound
for my embrace
her arms surround
my fear anger hate and distrust
my soul's cries
smothered in dust

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2009-09-04 11:51 PM

Nice, I like this. Welcome to PIP, I hope to see more.

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Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
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Bella Mafia
New Member

since 2009-08-10

Posts 8

2 posted 2009-11-26 11:37 PM

I like this very nice

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

3 posted 2009-11-28 07:32 AM

Love the rhythm, rhyme, title, meaning.

I enjoyed this very much.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

4 posted 2009-12-01 12:00 PM

beautifully said

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

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