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SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2009-01-03 09:29 PM

The way you speak, the lies that leak
Running down your chin
Colliding with the blood from your last victim
And the attention you crave
Comes with the hatred you gave
Bottom feeder
Surfacing only to kill collecting the wrongs committed against you
Bottom feeder
I should have known
Your disguised intentions
To turn them against me
Now I sit alone
Intoxicated
Another drink to chase the pain
Forget the blame
To you, I was just another face
Despite the crowd, why me?
So many oblivious souls to feed on
To drag down with you
Bottom feeder
Now there's no more where that came from
Bottom feeder
I see right through you
Bottom feeder
I see right through you.

January 3rd 2009
Emily Shives

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2009-01-06 09:11 AM

Emily...You have a great talent for writing and I am so greatful that you decided to share it with all of us here at passions.
I look forward to reading more from you.
I would really like to see you post your poetry on the main forum, so more people could enjoy it as I have, and thanks again for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

2 posted 2009-01-08 01:34 PM

"The way you speak, the lies that leak
Running down your chin
Colliding with the blood from your last victim
And the attention you crave
Comes with the hatred you gave"

I was really feeling that.
Solid drop for sure.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2009-01-14 12:55 PM

Wow I really really like this.
And what do you know!? there's another Emily on here! anyway, this is a great poem. I'll be reading more from you.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

jared34ricky
Junior Member

since 2008-12-30

Posts 12
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2009-01-14 05:10 PM

what is it with everyone and rhyming

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

5 posted 2009-01-19 06:26 PM

I reallt like your work Emily. There's pain but a lot of strength too.

On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides

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