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since 2008-12-03
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Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-06-24 02:23 PM



Is the glass half full?
Must it fill the void to be whole?
Does the glass recognize potential?
Even though it was birthed...
from the dirt of the earth.
It's clean, it's sleek
The form in all it's glory,
finally has hit it's peak.
No rust to stain.
No fuss to maintain.
Only a dark cupboard and dust remain.
Yet, in the darkness...
no one can see the texture is plain.
The eye cant hear.
The ear cant see,
Clearly it is self-evident.
That when the glass shatters...
It feels no pain.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

© Copyright 2009 Brian M. Caouette - All Rights Reserved
UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon
1 posted 2009-06-27 12:36 PM


This is a very insightful poem and it makes the mind think about life in a new way with a vivid perpective. I like it very much!=^.^=                     ~UNTAMEDelegance
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