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Dark Poetry #5

The Beast Inside

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-06-18 01:16 AM

Blood pounds
rushing into my head;
crowding my vision and
leaving me helpless
to the anger that blinds.

I'm shaking
uncontrollably.
The fury is building
inside of my heart;
scraping at the edge of my sanity;
pulling me down
into a blood filled frenzy.

Blood pounds
rushing into my head;
crowding my vision and
leaving me wishing
to leave it behind.

I'm repulsed
at the beast raging inside.
At the mindless rage
that begs me to loose control.
To let go of my humanity and give in
to the primal call
of my inner beast.

But my humanity is all I have left.
I won't let go.
I won't loose control.
I won't give myself over.

Oops...
Too late.

Blood pounds
rushing into my head;
obscuring my eyes…
Until it’s over and I see
what the wild beast inside of me has done.

Then I cry
for the blood covering my hands.

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

1 posted 2009-06-18 01:58 AM

loved the images it gave me but u should change the color and i know it is suposed to capture the poem but some cant read red

~Indya

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

2 posted 2009-06-18 05:41 PM

Actually i don't know how to change the color. Do you know how to change the color? If so, then please help.=^.^= ~UNTAMEDelegance

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